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Dawn sweeps the night away The sun awakens it's sons Dancing & prancing Another day is done The sequel tommorow The rerun yesterday Dancing & prancing Lifetimes away Seldom a thought To time fleeing.. Never seeing Whats under the sun Busy the marketplace The actors appear Chasing the gold coin From far and anear Yet never noticing Times passing severe Laughter not heard Spirits soar not Time reaches out Destiny our lot Marketplace hush quiet Only a plot A sign saying something About some man who is not Few will remember Gold coin remembered not Perhaps we should have Danced more in the sun Tic-tock the bell tolls The race has been run The winner the one Who danced in the sun R.E.B.
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I can't pick a favorite line from this as I like the whole thing. Mind if I put it on a background and print it out for myself?
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basca,
I am honored you would ask. Of course you may. I have not written in years, and am rather insecure about my attempts at a comeback, Your request has inspired me. Thank you. Rod
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Thank you. Give it a whirl. I always enjoy reading what you post in here and I'm sure I'm not the only one.
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bumped because I saw a guest looking at this old piece
and I rather liked the piece myself hence the bump
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That IS a wonderful piece!
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