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Old 08-15-2008, 08:25 PM
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I Am Wind whispering




I am the lite that passes your heart
In the second watch of night
I am wind walking, and time standing still
I am he that warms your heart this night
Stars bright, I am they in your eyes closed tight

I am wind of sea that beckons who dares
I am watchman of night when others deep sleep
I am dawn walking, sentinal at noon
I walk as your shadow, holding you in full bloom
I am the whisper of wind that walks in nights lite

Not all know me, even less know my name
But I ride upon snowstorms and lightning alike
I ride upon sunsets made by days end
I reel upon thunder
All at once do they blend

I am he who you once knew
When simple wrapped your heart
I am days end and nightfall
I am the sword blazed and sharp
I am the wind whispering, as the faint sound of harp

I am he you once knew.......
When days were softer
And joy you still knew
I am hope resurrected
Yes, the fresh morning dew

I am the wind whispering, softly still calling you....



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Old 08-16-2008, 04:31 PM
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I wrote a long in depth critique of this poem and
then my computer crashed cause it sucks.

So I ain't gonna write it again.

So there.
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I wrote a long in depth critique of this poem and
then my computer crashed cause it sucks.

So I ain't gonna write it again.

So there.
Shit!

I hate it when that happens man.

Thanks anyway

I hope it was good.

Its a piece I really like.
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This piece collected MORE attention at 'Authors Den'

Than any other of my other '100 poetry titles in 5 years.'

With that said............

Were gona give her one more run down the slope

Cus I'm thinking she desrves that dignity

'Ride high & proud pretty piece'

You are worthy of the attention.

Flow gracefully pretty one

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A spirit-filled poem. You are a wordsmith, both with pen and with voice. Lovely.

PS: Zephyrella means woman of the wind.

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PS: Zephyrella means woman of the wind.
Now that, I did not know.

Thanks for tossing an ornament on this tree Z....

She, the piece is worthy of decoration.

I say that about little I write.

Say, that is......lol
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why thank you Sir... it appears just in time


Wow...

"I am wind walking, and time standing still "




"I walk as your shadow, holding you in full bloom "



"Not all know me, even less know my name
But I ride upon snowstorms and lightning alike
I ride upon sunsets made by days end
I reel upon thunder
All at once do they blend"




"I am days end and nightfall
I am the sword blazed and sharp "



"I am hope resurrected "



Incredibly bold... Just... masterfully writen...
The piece jumps off the page and demands your attention...
Amirable depths displayed with imense courage...

This type of poetry is what I seek and adhere to...this energy invigerates me...

The rhymescheme is sewn in complete compliment with the content... a masters touch...

I'm am thankful I read and re-read this a few times before my slumber... Awsome.

I can go on and on
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